The World is a stage,
A big life lasts for nights..
A small,
play folds up in first-half.
The roles we play are reflections,
Shades of few emotions.
Yet we never fail to claim,
The players turn critic, winners only they should determine.
You judge me, I will do the same,
No questions asked, cuz it takes turn.
For you think the best of me,
I will give another the pain to become perfection.
I stand in a corner, with a frugal parchment,
Few words of assent, the rest is all blank.
As long as script flows, commendations overwhelming,
After a while, the free spirit descends into training
I don’t want to play,
Of vanity or joy or shame,
Of bondage or anything humane,
No more pretenses and perfection,
The soul craves for freedom.
Eternal plays, acts of reflections,
Inane I was And I would vanish from all.
I watch mine with an ethereal heart,
And the curtains fall.
The stage of Life!… great poem, with many layers and very meaningful!… best wishes. Aquileana 😀
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Well written. Hope all is well.
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Reblogged this on iexploreworld.
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Very moving and sad curtain fall, Ady. I have really enjoyed sharing your journey here. I hope that new beginnings bring peace to you, and your soul finds its freedom. 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂 Good luck to you with everything 🙂
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I replied to your other comments on my post – but then deleted everything. Afterwards, I thought maybe you hadn’t had a chance to read my comments? If so, I can send again!
Hope to see you on WP again soon.
Take care 🙂
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I guess I didn’t get it 😀 No worries,I am working on my comeback , you are very special to me and we almost started our journey together so I do wish for our friendship to continue 😀 Thank you very much for letting me know 🙂
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Yes we did start our tentative blogging excursion together 🙂 I always look out for you and your posts, and comments 🙂
So – here’s to more in the future 🙂 And Good Luck 🙂
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This is a very powerful poem Ady. I hope things are well with you. I have missed seeing you on the blogs. Are you okay? Is everything okay? Your poem is truly lovely but also sad. ((Hugs!!)) xoxo
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Will tell you soon 🙂 Thank you for reading 🙂
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Beautifully written sweetie, but I can see the pain in it 😦 I hope my sweetie finds peace and greater happiness soon. All the best and a world of happiness to you ❤ 🙂 Hugs and kisses to you xoxoxoxo Khloe
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Thanks a million dear 😀
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You’re welcome sweetie ❤ 🙂
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Very strong meaningful words, beautiful yet a bit painful. I hope freedom comes soon enough to find peace within 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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